SALINE
SALINE
Cast off from the dock of reality
into the sea of abandon.
Past the vast alluvial pains of oncore,
no anchor.
"Anchor, anchor!" I scream.
Pitch and roll.
Hee, hee, and yaw.
Fine loud slaps of the wind.
Rudder askew.
A wake. Awake. A wake.
Seaweek slick.
Vast kelpbeds slither across the ceiling.
Surrounded, tugged, drowningthen back to the surface.
Hee and yaw.
It has been many years
since I have been to sea,
and still I dream of heading out to feel
the great saline solution.
Cast off from the dock of reality
into the sea of abandon.
Past the vast alluvial pains of oncore,
no anchor.
"Anchor, anchor!" I scream.
Pitch and roll.
Hee, hee, and yaw.
Fine loud slaps of the wind.
Rudder askew.
A wake. Awake. A wake.
Seaweek slick.
Vast kelpbeds slither across the ceiling.
Surrounded, tugged, drowningthen back to the surface.
Hee and yaw.
It has been many years
since I have been to sea,
and still I dream of heading out to feel
the great saline solution.
posted by Vipul | 12:22 PM
3 Comments:
Hee Yaw!!
That's ok poor child...go to Mumbai nd u'll find sea there...
Have u actually written all these poems urself?????????
{wonders again nd again}
Never knew ma boi was so talented!! Gosh why didnt i accept ur proposal earlier???!?!?!? ;)
Dont post so many poems at the same time...nd if u hv a lot o them...donate some to me ;) Ma blog's kinna suna suna
K guess who!!
hmmm abhi kaun ho aap with a suna suna blog hidden behind the mask of anonymous good god gracious
thanks for the comments Gosh am gettin the gud ones except for tat horny poem commentin ofcuz i expected someone criticising it but nywyz Will keep writin more and more!
Reveal urself plz
hehe cuz i knew it was u who else than anna
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